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Archie and Michelle VORE

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*Here's the request that took months for me to finaly make sorry it took so long*

In the forest a small mouse by the name of Archie was searching for some barriers to eat; he was a brown field mouse and he loved to eat barriers like any other mouse; Archie walked along a path that he always took. The path was lined with tall green blades of grass; Archie looked up to see the giant trees that towered over him.

He took his small nose to the air then took a whiff his small nose twitched many times from the smell of something different, and then a smell ticked his nose the smell of barriers "Barriers," he said he could already taste those delicious berries he got on all fours then started off to the direction of the barriers sent it could have not been a better day Archie felt lucky and it was a good day to have barriers at that; the sun was out and the forest look peaceful all around the little mouse.

Archie scurried along a path of old leaves that brushed against his little body Archie felt a change in the wind he could here the wind blowing left and then right it kept changing directions for some odd reason, Archie stopped then blinked twice he put his arms on his hips "what's with this wind," he said to himself his nose then twitched he smelled a different sent then he looked down to notice there was a shadow that kept getting bigger and bigger then Archie looked up to see a "OWL!" Archie cried out as a white feathered owl came down at Archie with its back legs raised up, and its claws ready for the grab Archie quickly made a dash to the right avoiding the owl's claws.

The owl flapped its wings then flied up into the sky then dashed down back at Archie again for a second catch Archie prepared himself he did not take a chance at running if he did the owl would chase him down and catch him; the owl flapped its wings faster now it came down like a torpedo Archie made a dash for it, he could feel the rush of the wind going past him in a great speed then a gust of wind carried up a dust cloud that blinded the brown mouse temporally.

Archie's eyes sting he rubbed them desperately hopping the owl wouldn't make another dash his one eye began to water he could barley see out of it now, he could hare the flapping of the owl's wings then he hard a thump, both his eyes were watering now Archie shaded a few tears then blinked a few times he looked around trying to find the owl then he notice on the ground a shadow was looming over him, everything was going in slow motion Archie slowly turned and twisted his little head up, his eyes widen and the teeth in his mouth chattered for fear had gotten the best of him.

Right in front of the poor field mouse was the owl staring down at him with anger in its expression, its black eyes flared and from its beck it hissed like a hungry snake (it was angry) Archie did not know if he should make a run for it his mind was filled with thoughts that kept coming into his head flashing like a light, Archie tried to move but in split second he could feel a sharp pain erupting in his side he looked down to see the owl's beak braking throw the furry skin of his left side, then Archie was violently lifted then tossed back and forth making him sick to his stomach and the pain become even worse, then he felt the beak loosen then Archie found himself in mid-air everything around him twisted and turned.

Archie landed hard on the ground, Archie's little body burned with pain his side was bleeding from the owl's beak his legs hurt so much from the fall when he tried to move his limbs flared up in pain "I,.....I, can't move," Archie coughs his vision was becoming blurry "I,....I don't think I'll make it I'm done for," he said before passing out on the dirt.

Not far from the little injured mouse vixen (a female fox) was walking along some brown and orange leaves she leaped on them playfully leaping then landing on the leaves making them flutter in the air, her name was Michelle she was very playful girl, she is very social, and adores small curious creatures, but is sometimes a little sadistic towards them, she has kind of a teenage attitude; she  had large brown ears, and her fur was yellow color, she is fennec fox; she stopped to take a smell of the fresh air she picked up a sent of blue barriers it made her mouth water she licked her lips then took off after the sweet smell, she had passed many tall trees and bushes but then she quickly stopped her ears twitched, and her eyes widened along with her mouth that was opening in awe she could hear a owl's screech in annoyances then she quickly looked up to see a owl flying in full speed away from her.

In her shock Michelle had been frozen for a couple of seconds till she was able to catch her breath her furry chest puffed in and out, her bushy tail wrapped around her body she shivered a little her ears twitched a second time she could hear the sound of little cries of pain and they were coming from a very young voice like Michelle but male, she followed the sound of the cries she brushed passed some tall grass and looked down to see a little brown mouse his legs were bleeding and he looked badly injured Michelle gasped in a shock she quickly ran over to the little mouse "You poor thing," she said in a sad ton she nudged the mouse a little he was still alive but passed out "you poor little thing," she said nuzzling him "don't worry I'll help you," she said before opening her jaws and scarffing the mouse into her mouth she kept her mouth open partly and made sure not to swallow.

Archie was dozing in and out he could see yellow fox feet coming over to him till he passed out again, his vision was coming back he could feel himself being lifted up he was not sure but the cold air had been replaced with a warmth and Archie could feel around he was on something soft, very soft it was almost conferrable if it had not been wet, he could hear breathing from all around him, he blinked a few times to see a line of white pointed things around him and what he was laying on was a pink colored fleshy thing, Archie began to move his paws around feeling the pink flesh then Archie realized there was a color of reddish pink around him, he could feel a warm slimy liquid dripping on his brown fur he now realized he was inside a mouth, Archie began to panic he used what strength he had he had to find something to grab before what ever had him would swallow Archie then made a jump for it, he leaped to the back of the throat grasping on to a fleshy uvula that bounced up and down, and flung back and forth, when he gripped it and added weight to it.

From outside Michelle could feel the little mouse moving around in her mouth then she could feel that the mouse was begging to panic she was about to speak when she felt something in the back of her throat and it hurt, she gagged a few times she sticked her tongue out in a chocking like form she started panicking herself hoping she would not throw up of swallow the mouse by mistake, she paused for a few minuets keeping her mouth open for the little mouse.

Archie had a tight grip on the uvula his eyes were closed shut thinking it was his end till everything had paused all he could hear was breathing and the sound of flexing flesh and dripping saliva he opened his eyes to see the creature's mouth was open but why?
"Little mouse," a female voice asked
"ye,...yes," Archie answered
"please don't be afraid of me I was just carrying you,"
"how,....how can I trust you who are you," he asked
"My name is Michelle and I am a vixen and its nice to meet you," she said in a happy ton
"You mean A fox, fox's eat mice like me, you just want to eat me," Archie said barring his furry face into the fleshy uvula closing his eyes tightly
"No, no not at all I was carrying you to my home I swear, and I was just carrying you in my mouth, in fact I have been carrying you for half an hour now," Michelle said
"really?" he asked he then swung the uvula back and forth leaping off the uvula and landing on Michelle's soft pink tongue Archie looked outside to see he was in a different place he also saw a little bit of Michelle.
"Thank you Michelle," he said before resting on her tongue again "just rest I'll take care of you promise," she said before continuing on her journey home.

Michelle arrived at her home it was a borrow that was larger on the inside there was plenty of run for her and the Archie she grabbed some blankets she had found and placed Archie on the soft blanket, Archie was awake when Michelle placed him on the blanket "thank you," Archie said he even hugged her muzzle it made Michelle blush red "so what's your name?" she asked
"my name is Archie," he said
"well Archie its good to meet you, and my I also say you have a nice taste," Michelle gave Archie some space then stretched her back lifting her back rump up then her front.
Archie didn't know what to say he blushed thinking she actually liked how he tasted but what did it mean, "so I taste good," he asked Michelle looked at him "well yes you do, I would hope to taste again sometime," Michelle said giving a giggle before going over to a part of the borrow she came back with some barriers "would like something to eat," she asked Archie's eyes brightened when he saw the berries "I guess that's a yes,"
Archie and Michelle had talked for sometime and shared blue berries together it was getting late and Michelle was getting tired Archie didn't notice till he saw her yon exposing her maw Archie had stared a couple of times when her mouth was for some reason, had he started getting attached to being in her mouth; he hopped Michelle did not notice.

Michelle had walked over to another pare of blankets and even spare clothing she had made a bed out of she rested on her back "ahhhh what a day, well good night Archie see you in the morning," Michelle said before closing her eyes and falling a sleep, a few hours had passed Archie had dozed off a few times but woke up he could not shack this feeling did he truly like being in Michelle's mouth?
What was it that he liked about it so much he was glade he had a new friend but he felt something else as well was it some kind of love, was he in love with her?
Archie's head sinned and buzzed with questions so he had to feel it again, Archie walked over to Michelle he climbed onto her chest to his luck her mouth was open he climbed up on her bottom jaw then peeked down into the abyss of Michelle's mouth her throat flexed as she breathed in and out, her pink spongy tongue was flat on her bottom jaw, Archie slowly claimed over her fur bottom lip and walked over her white fangs he carefully took one foot on to her tongue then he claimed inside it was just like he left it he could hear Michelle's breathing from around him it even gave him warmth, and her lines of saliva socked his brown fur he felt very pleasant being inside her mouth he rested himself on her tongue her tongue felt warm like everything around her mouth, he then felt his eyes become heavy then he rested his head on her soft wet surface it was better then the blankets then Archie feel asleep.

Michelle slowly opened her eyes she could feel something in her mouth she lifted herself up she could see a little tail sticking out of her mouth she reached her paws up and grabbed the tail then opened her mouth, she pulled out Archie he was socking wet with her saliva she blushed a little "um Archie," she said Archie woke up from the sound of her voice
"Oh,... ah,..ah,..hi Michelle,"
"its ok Archie you don't have to feel embarrassed I like it too,"
"you like what?" Archie asked wondering what he liked about Michelle was a thing,
"vore I like it too, and I'm sure you do to," she said giving him a smile
"vore, so that's what's it called," Archie said
"and its ok Archie there's nothing wrong with it at all that's what makes you and me friends well we would still be friends if you didn't like it,"
Archie smiled at her Michelle placed Archie on her snout, Archie stared into her eyes "so this vore its ok, but what dose it mean?"
"its a fetish were you are eaten or being eaten, but when I eat my pray I don't hurt them I keep them safe in my tummy," Michelle said then gave a giggle "Wow so I liked that,"
"you do like it,"
"hmm I guess I do,"
Archie began to blush at what he was going to ask her
"um could you,..."
"I'd be glade to do it," she said.

Michelle tilted her head up a little Archie kept his balances on her nose "ready," She asked "yes," Archie answered she picked Archie up with her fingers then sticked her tongue out, she pressed Archie on her soft tongue Archie loved this he reached his arms out holding on to her tongue hugging it squishing it ageist himself even more Michelle began to push him deeper into her mouth, Archie found himself back in her mouth again the light began to vanish as Michelle closed her mouth with Archie inside.

Her mouth was like it was before he loved it she began to swish him around her mouth with her tongue, she began to salivate pools of saliva bathed Archie as Michelle swished him around tasting him, enjoying his great flavor her tongue lifted him up to the ruff of her mouth, she squished him between her tongue and soft ruff of her mouth, He was stuck against the top of the mouth several times by her tongue and then pushed into her cheek where she began to suck on him and then licked on the chest, "that feels so good," Archie said feeling so relaxed and comfy, Michelle enjoyed swishing him around in her mouth when she heard her stomach growl.
"Hey Archie I'm getting hungry, so guess what," she said with her mouth full Archie curled himself around her tongue when he hard her talking "well I guess this means I'm going to be your dinner," Archie said "yes but don't worry you will be fine I promise," Michelle said then she slowly began to tilt her head back and then she started to swallow, Archie began to slide down her tongue into the black endless tube at the back of Michelle's mouth Archie passed a little uvula then fell into a flashy tube Archie was forced into her esophagus the muscles tightened and loosened on him, bringing him down slowly he enjoyed it greatly the muscles were even giving him a full body massage as he went down it could not be any better he loved every minute of it.
From the outside a  lump was visible going down her furry neck and chest, she tickled at the lump as it traveled  she pawed at it playfully as she enjoyed the feeling so gratefully, Archie traveled down till he soon reached a powerful ring shaped muscle which signified the entrance to her stomach and was pushed through it, he plopped into her stomach Archie took a long look around her stomach.
Her stomach was a pink color and there was little light inside it was also very squishy, as she breathed the flesh would move gently, and he could here her genital heart beat around him she rested against her soft stomach wall he nuzzled it with joy, Archie rubbed her pick fleshy walls with his little paws.

From outside Michelle rubbed her belly and gave a happy look, it felt great having something alive inside her belly she then saw some blue berries then grabbed them "might as well give him something to eat," she said then swallowed the barriers, From the inside Archie could hear her swallow two blue berries rolled down into her stomach "thank you Michelle," Archie started eating the first berry after he half ate the berry he rested against the soft stomach wall and he listened to her lovely heart beat that helped him drift off to sleep "good night," his final word was,
"good night Archie," Michelle said then rested on her soft blankets and drifted off into a sleep her self with her new friend inside.   

                                        The End :)
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Anthrolover72's avatar
i was hoping for a part 2 to the story but this was one of my favorites...i actually dreamt of this scenario ^~~^ but that means its good.